I have a series of poems to write from my creative writing class tomorrow and I really need some feed back on what people think about them. Please let me know what you think.

I was young, but so were you.

Only you knew, you knew what you were doing.

You knew right from wrong, I had yet to learn.

You didn’t think about my innocence,

you only thought about yourself, so selfish.

You left me with permanent scars,

not only on my body -

but in my brain, on my heart, in my soul.

What were you left with?

Nothing.

What did you get out of it?

Pleasure.

Did you make amends?

No.

Did you feel guilty?

No, but I did.

Am I left pondering and wondering - Why Me?

Yes.

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